Comments : I'm still learning

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    This poem is a perfect summary of love and it's role in life. You learn, you love, you get hurt and lost, but it still continues on again as life does, until old age and death consume our tales. A very interesting prospective.

    -Tainted

  • 18 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    I loved this poem. and it's so very true. I could totally relate. Keep up the great work, I hope to read more by you soon. 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Hey I love your poem...I gave you a 5,lol! this is very creative and something sad!
    yet very heartfelt and wonderful, very enjoyable to read
    you did a great work
    Keep it up
    Best Of Luck
    NemO xxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Awesome....it hav a strong meaning. the ending is amazing. lov is sad. it really capture my eye. keep writing:)

  • 18 years ago

    by disenchanted

    This is great. i can really relate to it. it sums up what im feeling right now perfectly...
    xox Amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Ignis Divine

    Nice, it has strong feelings in it. I love to find that in a poem. keep up the good work :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Trinity

    I really love it.. I can totally relate to it. I think it's wonderful. It really is. Im hoping to read more from you!

  • 18 years ago

    by JUSTMEXXX

    IT IS SO TRUE AND THIS POEM IS A BEAUTIFUL LESSON TO KEEP IN OUR HEARTS

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Amazing.....this is so so great!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow.. great write.. you wrote it well.. and you could really see the lesson to be learnt.. great summary of love and its role in love.. loved your rhyming scheme.. and the words you used..5/5/
    ,..Please can you rate and comment on my poems?.. Thanks..
    Best Wishes..
    Kirsty xx