by ♥s|a|r|a|h♥ Sep 2, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
When my life starts going striaght |
Ooo. I liked this a lot. I didn't much like the flow, but I liked the idea of the story type of poem. Good job. =) 5/5 xoxo |
by Jessica
Awhh.. That was so sad sweetie.. The flow was better in this one though.. It worked well.. The emotion was very sad and the descriptions were great.. Nicely done! 5/5 |
by HOLLYBXBE
Wow I really can relate to this its amazing I love it |