Pretty good. There were a few spelling mistakes, but hey, everyone makes mistakes. :) Over all, pretty good! Keep on writing! ;) |
by Alexander
Its really good poem keep on u have good talent |
I loved this one! it was really good keep it up! |
Um.. it was.. OK? yeah. well. Better luck next time. |
I've been in that situation before i know it sucks but things will get better |
by Freak7265
Good job!...Even if it doesn't rhym it was still good! |
by LoreNz0
This poem dont have to ryme to b good coz its great!! and really makes sence |