I love the childishness portrayed in this poem. I haven't heard anything like this in a really long time. It's very refreshing! Keep it up!

God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

Lol great write.. very childish.. but thats what makes it so good, cute write! lol.. made me laugh.. good imagination..5/5..
Best Wishes..
Please rate and comment on my poems, thanks..
Kirsty Palmer xxx