Sad

Man this poem tell about a relationship i had and wanted back but never did me and him where together for 4 years and he walked away like that...but you know what you need to move on just like i did i know its hard but try cuz at the end she will want you back

I lveo the repition, adnthe flow..great work..

lissa

Thats actually a quite a good poem. =) excellent way of saying things.

keep writing, u have potential and talent,
xxx

Wow- very sad but written well, alot of emotion in it..

october xx

I miss you...