by ♥s|a|r|a|h♥ Sep 3, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
**now completed** |
Okies...I gave it a 4/5. I thought you were trying to hard to rhyme in some (not all) places. It just made the reading a bit more difficult for me anyways lol. The flow was a bit off, but the vocab was superb in some places. Good job. Keep up the writing! =) 4/5 xoxo |
Oh wow.. I really enjoyed this story.. 5 for sure. Keep writing! :-) |
by Sarah Ann
Oh, great poem! It was such a great love story. Very powerful and different. I loved the word use> Though the flow could have been a bit better, it was great, nonetheless. Keep it up! |
This poem has a unique format with a flawles flow. The content is a romantic testament to the power of love It is excellent |
5/5 wow i love the words u use i mean that was relly good |