Thats so cute - love the last 2 stanzas :)
kat - xox

Nice touch..I like poems in a structure/style like this one,
Very nice indeed..
Keep on writing on what u feel and like.
God Bless.

This was pretty good hunny! The flow was a little off as the lines were mostly different lengths and the rhymes were a little bit awkward, but that can always be worked on.. I liked the idea, it was quite cutee.. Nicely done sweetie, keep it up! 4/5

5/5 wow i love the words u use i mean that was relly good

This poem has a unique format with a flawles flow. The content is a romantic testament to the power of love It is excellent

Oh, great poem! It was such a great love story. Very powerful and different. I loved the word use> Though the flow could have been a bit better, it was great, nonetheless. Keep it up!

Oh wow.. I really enjoyed this story.. 5 for sure. Keep writing! :-)

Okies...I gave it a 4/5. I thought you were trying to hard to rhyme in some (not all) places. It just made the reading a bit more difficult for me anyways lol. The flow was a bit off, but the vocab was superb in some places. Good job. Keep up the writing! =) 4/5 xoxo

Samantha