Beautiful poem, my friend! It was very sweet! I really loved it from the first line to the last.
I just think you should change:
"...me dehes solo..." for "...me DEJES solo..."
"...nos encenaremos..." for "...nos ENSEÑAREMOS..."(But I think you should copy the " ñ ", it doesnt appear in all computers)

Anyway, keep it up!
Much love,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Well, I guess the site doesnt let me write that letter, so leave it like that!
Best wishes!

Ooooh. I haven't read your stuff in a long assss time. I'm a bad friend...lol.

I loveddddd this though. Just cuz it was in spanish...haha. Nah but it was real good n sweet...i kno ur girl is gonna love it...unless she already read it...then i'm sure she loved it...lol well i'll ttyl. God bless

-Poetess

--Idk if I told you that this is a new account...lol.--