I hate him

by The Poetic Child   Sep 3, 2006


Written Aug. 28th

Back way before, when we were free,
when the only guy you loved, was only me
back when the stars, came to shine,
back to the lady, I once called mine

had me stuck, eating of your hands,
to a point of love, no teenager understands
We went out for awhile, day by day
to produce more love, then my mouth can say

but then you broke me hard, how could you,
leaving me a message, saying sorry we're through,
Gasping for air, you took my breath,
took everything I had, till theres nothing left

Supposedly you found, yet another guy,
It adds more pain, that every second goes by,
but you talk to me cool like its "all good"
Now when people mention his name there knocking on wood

He took my life, he took my smile
my reason to live, to run that extra mile,
I cant bare..to to see you in the gym,
he took my angel...I hate him

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tyler

    I know exactly how u feel,great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Denise

    Awwww....im sorry david...she has the same gym period as you??>..hmm...anyways....it was in explicit cuz..it said there were some words in it...idk...and so i jus said F it and put it in explicit....yea...dont worry about d.t.s.i.k....its not important..lol...but good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by stargirl49

    I rate this one 100/5 because i know how you feel. of course, i watched a girl take my love away from me instead of a guy. that would've been much worse tho.
    keep up the awesome work!!
    ~maggie

  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    DAMN! i wasnt the first one to comment =[ but oh well to the poem!.....it was so amazing but sad! so much emotion there!
    it flowed very well! loved the ending! 5/5
    And Be strong everything will turn alright i hope!
    Take Care
    And
    Keep Smiling

    Much Love
    -*- Tormented

  • 18 years ago

    by Spanish Star

    Wow..that was so full of emotions. And shows that u truly r a sweet guy. Great poem. Keep it up;)

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