by Raychil
This poem does say a lot. Love is a complicated thing, you don't just see someone and love them, you grow to love them. And as you know, its not like in the movies. This write says a lot, I think you could tweak it some, make it a little more rythmic, but its a lovely poem. |
by Sarah Ann
I understand what you are going through. Everyone gets through confused moments in their life, just listen to your heart and let it pass by. Do what you think is right, then nothing can go wrong. Keep up the good work. |