Untouchable

by jessy   Sep 3, 2006


I see a tunnel
a dim light at the end
a shadow.
a person.
you.
i see your face.
your reaching out
to me
your not too far
i reach out
i cannot move
cannot reach
your too far
yet so close
why cant i reach?
your only right there!
this isnt right!
i love you!
why cant i just have you?!
you are comming close
almost here
just in reach
i go to grab you
your taken away
further and further you go
till you are gone
i see you no longer,
your gone,forever.

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  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    Awww that was sad but I liked it. Very well written and the word choice was great for the style of the poem. Actually I can relate to you, my love is in Asia....I just write my poems from what I feel in my heart and how I think it would be. That is why you'll find some that relate to you. lol....I'm really glad you like my poetry, I love when people enjoy it, and of course I don't mind if you add me to your favorites. You are a really amazing poet yourself and I had already added you to my favorites...hope YOU don't mind. lol
    This was a beautifully sad poem.
    5.5
    Breanna

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