Will.You.Save.Me?

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Sep 3, 2006


As I face unto another challenge
Another obsticle in life,
That blocks me from my destiny.
Hope is vanished
Failure kicks in,
And tears begin to roll.
Prayers suddenly stop
Hate rages towards God,
Another evil deed from the devil.
Lines across my arms
Suicide crosses my mind,
Blood drips from my body.
Tell me when time will fly
To make years come quickly,
So my death comes fast.
Singing a song
Releases my disgust,
As it forms just another sad death.
Can I help for who I am
What I am and what I become,
When I look at me in the mirror?
Time and time again
Moments blur and I need to re-ask
What happened to me?
What did I become?
Who am I?
And
Will.You.Save.Me?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Antares

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashla

    I like how you put this:

    As I face unto another challenge
    Another obsticle in life,

    Great writing 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Karin

    "And tears begin to roll.
    Prayers suddenly stop
    Hate rages towards God,"
    Very good wording there. lol I don't know what else to call it, but this is definitely a part in the poem that I find to be very strong. Great poem :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Glad Wise

    I read your poem it's nice, well not exactly nice but you know what i mean. i like how it ends. i only have one pathetic poem but i would be happy if you commment on it. thank you, buh-bye!

  • 18 years ago

    by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-

    Hey great poem! i love the way you have the questions in the end, well done, love mel

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