I dont know why ppl havent read this, its is an awesome poem, could you please read my poem Scars Of Memories Kept...i rele want some feedback!!! thank you n keep up the good work!

Hey great poem! i love the way you have the questions in the end, well done, love mel

I read your poem it's nice, well not exactly nice but you know what i mean. i like how it ends. i only have one pathetic poem but i would be happy if you commment on it. thank you, buh-bye!

"And tears begin to roll.
Prayers suddenly stop
Hate rages towards God,"
Very good wording there. lol I don't know what else to call it, but this is definitely a part in the poem that I find to be very strong. Great poem :)

I like how you put this:

As I face unto another challenge
Another obsticle in life,

Great writing 5/5

5/5