You've got talent :) keep it up 5/5 from me!

I didnt rate this or anything, just please fix the D.........O.............
M...............e.................
T................H.........I.............S............. final favor thing... its really unnecessary, and could completely draw the reader away from the meaning the poem is suppose to portray.

GREAT JOB! i like it.. i can relate ! im adding you 4 my fav's .. =] 5/5

I liked this poem.. thanks for the comment and yeah i was relating my poem to my parents fighting.. and the poem is about me.. IM sick of them fighting. it just makes me sad.. lol well comment me back please!

Tony you are so talented, i love it!
you wrote your poem how you wanted it, dont change it if you like it that way. it shows fading away and i think it adds to it!! 5/5 (as always of course!)

Really great poem...really thought out and put lot of emotion into it... 5/5

I'm completely speechless...I feel the exact same way. I'm always thinking about suicide, but I just don't know if I could ever actually go through with it...It's an amazing poem 5/5. And just to let you know, I care about you...you'll be missed by me...

This is sad beyond words... but very well written. a great poem. xxx

Great poem tony! i really fealt your pain and emotion in this poem! your a great writer!!
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Shae Radford ღ

Hmmm it was an interisting write i liked it its K O O L ...keep ur head up....Rachy xox

Wow this one almost made me cry i love it, it really touched that place in my heart.

Dont hurt yourself ppl care about u and u would be missed dont think like that..yea it looks like ur un happy but all you need is god trust me....just kno that ppl do care about u

Very good poem I like it

Wowie deep man. i really liked this..it used great details and really showed how hurt you are. this was amazing, keep up the fabulous work!

Very deep....... I lost all the words I can say
(I read yours can you return the favor?)

Very deep....... I lost all the words I can say
(I read yours can you return the favor?)

Very deep....... I lost all the words I can say
(I read yours can you return the favor?)

Very deep....... I lost all the words I can say
(I read yours can you return the favor?)

Wow really good ending...well thought out too. 5/5

Wow...you put so much emotion into this...i loved it...5/5.