Nice Piece, i only wish my writing were as well put as yours. Alot of mine is simple written but Yours gives a lot of meaning to the word poetry because of its construction and emotion. I dunno but keep up the good work! if you could give some good tips please do so id love to learn from you. c ya later

Hiya,
I really love this. I've read it for four or five times, and added you to my favs. :) It took me three days to get to give you a comment! I just keep on reading it over and over. :) I really like your style of writing, you know. It's beautiful, really. :) Keep it up ;)

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