This is Greatly written
pretty good flow
Nice rhyme
Sentimental Words
good job
5/5
~MF~

This is also wonderful poet for me it written so well and very impressive keep it up

You have wonderful ideas, and you know how to put it togheter, 5/5

Oh ok, this was interesting cos I thought you were really upset until i read the bottom bit. Glad you are ok and it wasn't real.Keep up your great work and unique style of writing.

I think this poem, is beautifully written!

Kool prayer. i'll pray that! lol