When I see you (Tetractys)

by Italian Stallion   Sep 3, 2006


.......................When
.......................I see
.................You at night
................Upon the stars
I just want you to be mine forever

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

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A Tetractys is composed of 5 lines with a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,10.
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***Written for a contest***

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  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    That's really kool! i like it a lot!

  • 18 years ago

    by thiswas2006

    Wow! I keep learning new things here. Never read a poem like this before. But it's too short and too sweet at the same time. Nice work Joe.Keep up the good work.

    Cheers.Have Fun.

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Hey Joe, havent talked to you in forever....

    Call me stupid but isnt that only 4 lines? Anyways...im not really used to this type of poen but I like it. good job. Please talk to me on MSN i miss being your friend. haha sounds kinda pathetic but w/e

    *julie

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