Pure Crystals [Tetractys]

by Jessica   Sep 3, 2006


.........................Snow
.........................Falling
....................Pure crystals
..................Sparkling in light
Slowly preyed upon as the bright sun wakes
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Tetractys:

Is composed of 5 lines with a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,10.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    I never knew that a tetractys was a foromofpoetry...I love your poemmy favorite season is Winter...

  • 18 years ago

    by Eugenius

    It's a good poem. It's very unusual. I liked it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Thats a nice poem! i love this way of wriiten poems!

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    Wow, Jessy i really liked this one! I also like how you try so many different styles!! I have never read a Tetractys but you make it look so easy i think i might try it!! Wonderful Job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awh! Jessy!! This was so good. I'm so glad that you've been trying out different styles so much lately. Your poetry is maturing so much!! Tehe! This one was beautiful. Excellent job! Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

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