Rain's Clear Lips

by Catastrophic Beauty   Sep 3, 2006


Staring at the rains clear lips,
Forming condensation again.
Drawing with my finger tips,
All along my window pane.

Splashes of rain sliding down,
Painting with its clear paint.
Making that crashing sound,
Like when somebody faints.

Dancing raindrops dribble,
Bouncing off of the white sill.
Different lines like scribbles,
Falling as the clouds spill.

Each drop is drying out,
Stopping the sway of hips.
Kissed away the droughts,
With their raining clear lips.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Oceansoul

    Good poem,very nicely done :)
    keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    THiS iS AMAZiNG! YOU MAKE YOUR POEMS SO DETAiLED i CAN`T STOPM READiNG! iT`S AMAZiNG! REALLY GOOD JOB!

    ______LOVE HiM*

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awh! This was beautiful, hun! I love nature poems so much, they're just so.. pretty? Tehe. Nice use of words in this one, and I liked the flow and rhyming! Awesome job. :P 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Interesting,
    Ive enjoyed reading it.
    It was well written and it has a certain feeling on it.
    Job well done!

    God Bless!

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