His Silence Made Me Cry

by Sarah Ann   Sep 3, 2006


I wouldn't have cried as much
If he kicked me out the door
My heart wouldn't be breaking
If he yelled at me some more

I wouldn't have hurt as much
If he forgave my mistake
Maybe I wouldn't feel so lost
If I wasn't left to break

I wouldn't have begged as much
For a desperate second chance
My lips wouldn't have betrayed me
But his feet refused to dance

His silence filled my empty heart
In contribution, my soul has died
If he uttered even one single word
Perhaps, I never would have cried

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kylie

    Wow, this poem left me speechless. It's a truly fantastic poem. You're a very talented writer. I love the way you take real things and write about them figuratively...not necessarily this poem but some of your other poems, great work! =)

    x.xBrokenx.x

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    OMJeebus! I've felt like this before. I can relate to this so much its not even funny...! I loved this so much. It even made me sad kinda...lol but in a good way...iunno what im saying lol. I just loved it! Take care and God bless,

    - Liz

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is soo beutifull i loved it! it was sad, but the flow of the poem! makes the reader to continue and not stop! loved it

    keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by awww

    Awww... thats so sad... sad and true to others... i also feel that way... hope you get over it... be strong! keep expressing yourself!

    ~angel~

  • 18 years ago

    by Hind

    Omg this one was the best...the last stanza was really good....5.5 defff.

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