Perfect also very deep poem but that poem was very really nice great job

Whoa. Caps. o.o I think you should lowercase the letters, because it's like you're yelling.

Okay, this wasn't a cliche poem, BUT a lot of the lines were cliche. I love the topic, but I think you could have written it so much better. The flow was definitely off in place, but not [too] bad.

I can feel where you're coming from. I can definitely relate.

It was an okay poem.

Hope I wasn't too harsh. :]

Keep writing!
Cayce

I love the picture that you painted in my head. Very powerful and moving poem. I bet a few people can relate to this. Great job.

Wow really creepy yet i loved it
something about blood on a white dress
5/5 keep wrighting