Boooooooooooooger.
Hmmm this was sad ;[
But i liked how you refered back to the title at the end, classic. Muh favourite part had to be "I always tried to look my best,
with these insecurities on my face." it was intense. Very well written :]
xx

How often we try to hide behind our exteriors. This was such a sad write, Hated to see the pain of it end like it did.

Keep it up and good job.

Peace and Happiness be with you
Jeannie

I really liked the ending.. It braught the whole poem together. Ah, I remember when I wrote poems like this.. Cheer up, doll. It'll be ok. ^.^

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

Awww .. 5/5
this so so touching, and i can relate to some of the words ..!!

Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

Sniff **

Great poem, nice use of words, very expressive. loved it.