Powerful those words really sunk great poem
Take care
HS

Really really good. the structure made it a bit hard to read, bot otherwise, a very effective poem with a lot of strength and emotion. well done.

I can't agree to Lady Vengeance! I liked the structure and I loved everything else too! Great work!

So you do know it when you make me sad?
no one would leave you on that floor and you know it.

-Eve

This is the best one you have ever writen.