To be honest, it's just like what every other guy writes. Except.. this one is more 'blunt'. I can't say it is the best I have read, but it isn't the worst. Try using more flow.

-Jennifer Overall Rating: 4.0/5

The poem was really nice, and your right people sometimes leave the one they love for the one they like not realizing they will only leave them for the one they love keep your head up and stay strong love will come again

Hey thanks for commenting on my poem no matter. i think this poem is really good keep it up.

I loved it

Awe! WOW, this poem is beautiful. i love it, i gave it a 5/5 :D keep up the good work, you're truly talented my friend. i'd love it if you'd check out my poems and comment/rate them. thanks alot!!
Rachel<3