True Life-double tetractys

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Sep 3, 2006


Screams,
Surround,
My sick life,
That is filled with,
Every tortured emotion that I've felt.
All because of your sick inhumane lies,
I've forgotten,
what real life,
truly,
is...

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a Tetractys is composed of 5 lines with a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,10. u can make double Tetractys by a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,10,10,4,3,2,1. or a triple by 1,2,3,4,10,10,4,3,2,1,1,2,3,4,10. and so on...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I love the interesting structure of this poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Oh. My. Goodness. This is amazing.. I don't know why I love it so much, but I do. Great job! Everything about it was perfect... Every line was flawless!

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Great one.
    another 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Interesting...I havent tried this form,
    I think you did really good.
    well keep it up!

    Keep on writing on what u feel and like

  • 18 years ago

    by Ch!ld~of~Darkness

    I liked your choice of words, and the flow was pretty kewl, keep up the awsome work. Plz check out some of my poems thnx
    Ch!ild~of~Darkness

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