Aww. It's so cute! I feel like this in my crush's arms! (Yes, 'tis only a crush, but we act like we're dating lol) I just wish that I could never leave his arms, and be with him forever. I never knew exactly how to put my feelings like that into a poem. You kind of expressed my feelings, as well as your own lol. That talent is rare and excellent to posess.

There was good flow throughout most of it, although it could be improved upon. But the emotion was absolutely perfect. It let me know exactly how you felt.

Sorry it took so long to r/r/c. >.< I've been busy lol. 5/5 xoxo =)

Samantha