Awww... it soo sad.... im sorri for ur loss.

Awww... it soo sad.... im sorri for ur loss.

Aww jeffrey aww aww. just awww.
shutup.
if i gave you a heartfelt comment, i don't think you'd appreciate it so..
uizagayndissiskinduhnycemkboy?lovely.x

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Well. I wasn't expecting this. It is OK. Nice emotion.. doesn't have flow though. Depth, not so much. Ehh. nice work? better luck next time, yo.

-Jennifer. Overall Rating: 4/5

OK. Flow: The poem just made me not want to keep reading. It was good at the start.. but the ending result was badly written. Depth: I didn't think you actually knew how it would feel to be like that. Yes, it was good that you saw what is normally there. But how do you think it made her feel?

Does this help a bit more? Hope so.

Jeffness...don't worry sweetie...i love this poem and despite what some people say, it flows like a waterfall....i think she should wake up n see that hers flows like concrete..
anyways this poem is amazing, just like you...but you already know that
love you,
jess

Really good keep up the good work

A new fan is born everyday.

thank you for your kind words adolph and I am glad you noticed I was trying to make a joke out of myself, I wasn't sure if I did a good enough job making that clear to the reader.

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Alright babe....so i figured out what it is i like about your poems, you have a way of rhyming without making it noticeable that you are rhyming....so let me put my poem geek glasses on for a sec...i like when poems rhyme, it makes them......nicer to read.....but sometimes it can tend to corny and obvious that the person is trying way to hard to rhyme.....but yours arent like that....they rhyme so easily and it makes it more enjoyable to read....i could have just told you this...but everyone loves comments....alright you are trying to sleep so im gonna stop typing now...
love you!

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HAPPY BIRTHDAY JEFFERSON!!!!!! (pond) hehe