A part of the Past

by Evelyn   Sep 4, 2006


As i sit
here with you
i wonder if
you feel the same way 2

Does the blood dripping
down my wrists
have you wanting me
like i want you

we were just two lovers
never meant to be
but this murder
has brought us together

and we'll die tonight
together at last
never apart
just a part of the past

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  • 18 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    So dark..yet touching and heart felt.. your very good and i really love you quote about best friends...your so amazing please keep writting more i can't wait to read more you've got alot of talent..so let it show!!!!!
    auna

  • 18 years ago

    by Ch!ld~of~Darkness

    I liked it, but there is one line that i think you should change, its onmly my opinion so its ok if u dont,

    we were just two lovers
    never meant to be
    but this murder
    has brought us together

    i think it should go

    we were just two lovers
    never meant to be
    but this murder
    has placed you here with me

    just because all your other stanzas seem to ryhme, well anyways awsome poem, keep up the good work, thnx 4 the commenmt

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