I liked it, but there is one line that i think you should change, its onmly my opinion so its ok if u dont,

we were just two lovers
never meant to be
but this murder
has brought us together

i think it should go

we were just two lovers
never meant to be
but this murder
has placed you here with me

just because all your other stanzas seem to ryhme, well anyways awsome poem, keep up the good work, thnx 4 the commenmt

So dark..yet touching and heart felt.. your very good and i really love you quote about best friends...your so amazing please keep writting more i can't wait to read more you've got alot of talent..so let it show!!!!!
auna