by Wasted Fake Smiles Sep 4, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Ok, this is bad cuz i can't let go of the event that i wrote about...n this was 4 a contest so yeah... |
by rachyBBY
It was a good poem, and if i could give you a 4 1/2 i would . . it deserves more than a 4 but [[just some constructive criticism]] it would be a little better . but i still enjoyed reading it :D |