Execution

by Lady Vengeance   Sep 4, 2006


Be still
Don’t cry
The time has come

Release your fears
Now it is done

The world shall share
Your bitter fate

No forgiveness
It’s too late

Fall upon
Your scabbed knees

And pray to die
Save me, please

The hammer falls
Justice served

Cold blade drops
But not deserved.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    WOW, really deep. i like ur taste:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    This is a great poem. Though some
    of the lines are confussing. But I like
    the style of it. It's different and I
    believe with just a bit of editing it can
    be perfect. 5/5

    Great Job
    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by X2892

    Very good poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Good choice of words
    Though I would not agree on some line,that makes confusion.
    5/5

    God Bless!

  • 18 years ago

    by President Dead

    I really like this poem,
    It flows really well,
    And has a simple, yet great rhythm.
    The imagery created when i read this is incredible,
    No matter what anyone says this is a very good poem, up there with your best, and i like it cos it's different.
    You've expressed yourself, that's all that matters.
    love ya

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