by twisted reality Sep 4, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
The tears stream down my face, |
I like your style here! You can tell a story well, mad me really think about life and the people you will effect in it. Very good! You've got a great talent! Keep it up! xoxo Shailee |
The flow is REALLY off here, it just doesn't flow well at all. |
by Robie Lincer
Thats a very nice poem!!! |
by Jenni Marie
This was so sad, and i am sorry for your loss, i hope things are getting better. |
by Karma Hope
I think it was very good because you exacuted your style very well... Nice work... |