That One Day

by twisted reality   Sep 4, 2006


The tears stream down my face,
As I hear those horrifying words.
Something happened not too long ago,
That horrible event occurred.

Let me tell you about that day,
The day all had foundered in my life.
It was not so long ago,
And it came so unexpectedly.

The sirens still ring in my mind,
And the screams were unbearable.
There was nothing I could do,
To save a one true loved.

My heart skipped a few beats,
As I heard that doctor declare,
That he had perished,
From a heart failure in his sleep.

His son had told me that one night,
And I wept with him until he was alright.
He was a total loss,
To everyone he knew and loved.

The thing is my dears...
He treated me like I was his.
He put me above everything else.
Above everyone else, he did.

He listened to my issues,
And help me get them through.
Oh dear Richard,
We will all miss you.

The day of the funeral came.
The black and the grey,
The tissues in their cold hands,
The weeping faces held so low.

Although, before I do go on,
I should probably tell you about me.
I'm just an average girl, in need of some love.
Strong, willful, wonderful love.

I'm the kind of girl who hides her feelings,
Who comforts those who need to be.
They never know how I really feel.
Maybe I should just let it all out.

Now, with that being said,
You never would've guessed.
That I had tears streaming down my face,
In loving memory of him.

The burying finally came,
With flowers and tissues galore.
They lowered his body into the ground,
And recited his Epitaph.

The priest then came.
Said words of good-bye.
And tried to comfort his loving wife,
While she wept uncontrollably.

I stayed longer with his family,
While all the others left.
And I tried to read through my tears,
What exactly his gravestone said.

"My Dear Friends as You Pass By
As You are Now, So Once Was I.
As I am Now, You Soon Must Be.
Prepare Yourselves to Follow Me."

He is gone now, never to return,
And I will never see his loving face again.
For he is with the Lord now,
In safe and gentle hands.

So now you know the story of,
Richard's life he wonderfully loved.
Until that day, when he foundered,
He was loved in many ways.

**-sob- Ok. This is a true 'story' I guess you could call it lol. My friends' dad died not very long ago, and I don\'t usually get emotional, so this was a big deal for me. I needed to get it out. It's also a new style for me. It's supposed to sound like a story, so don't ask lol. Hope you all like it. Please tell me what you think, as it's a new style I've tried. Thanks!**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lost and Confused

    I like your style here! You can tell a story well, mad me really think about life and the people you will effect in it. Very good! You've got a great talent! Keep it up! xoxo Shailee

  • 18 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    The flow is REALLY off here, it just doesn't flow well at all.

    I do understand the meaning, though; and you're right, this is definitely a story poem. A GOOD story poem, to be more exact.

    4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Thats a very nice poem!!!
    it was sad!!!
    but it was well penned
    keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so sad, and i am sorry for your loss, i hope things are getting better.

  • 18 years ago

    by Karma Hope

    I think it was very good because you exacuted your style very well... Nice work...
    Karms.