I think it was very good because you exacuted your style very well... Nice work...
Karms.

I think it was very good because you exacuted your style very well... Nice work...
Karms.

This was so sad, and i am sorry for your loss, i hope things are getting better.

Thats a very nice poem!!!
it was sad!!!
but it was well penned
keep it up!

The flow is REALLY off here, it just doesn't flow well at all.

I do understand the meaning, though; and you're right, this is definitely a story poem. A GOOD story poem, to be more exact.

4/5

I like your style here! You can tell a story well, mad me really think about life and the people you will effect in it. Very good! You've got a great talent! Keep it up! xoxo Shailee