Besides, unchanging love, doesn't exist
We wont be stronger when a new girl is in the midst
I wont tell anyone about your faults
I don't mind, this broken hearted waltz

^^ That stanza was very well written. The emotion and depth were very good. The flow was nice as well. Great work. Nice first poem. I hope to read more, so make more!!!

Lol. -Jennifer. Overall Rating: 4.4/5