Comments : I lost my pride.

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychil

    Beautiful poem Amber...and so tragic...I hope its not true, if it is, you should report it. No one deserves something like this to happen especially someone nice like you. I loved the poem though, very deep and beautiful rhyming. I have you in my prayers.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dionne Jones

    What a great poem, I just so hope this never happened to you, take care 5/5 x

  • 18 years ago

    by Deana

    Amber I agree with Raychil report it and most of all DO NOT blame yourself, you did nothing wrong he did.remember rape is a crime of violence not passion you did not lose your pride, he lost his. you are still the same great person ,don`t let him take that from you ,be strong,we`re here for you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Awww, hun my prayers stay with you darling, don't blame yourself for any of it...if this is true. Stay strong, I know the world is such a cruel place, but there are always two sides to a coin. Keep up your great work and thank you for your comment! xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    Good poem, thanks for the comment on mine, me and him are fine it's our ten month ann. today and we're ok, anyways i hope this poem isn't true, no one deserves to have such pain, no young woman deserves to have her innocence stolen from her, if this is true i think that you should report it and turn him in, because if not you are always haunted with the thought that he could strike again, you did a good job at expressing your feelings and how you felt but the words were repeated just a lil too much, but other than that this poem was excellent, no meaness (couldnt' think of a better word) intended, you said something to help me on mine, i told you somethin that would help you on yours,
    i gave it a 5
    thanks, hold your head high amber, God will make him pay! i promise
    thanks again
    sincerely
    ~*~Amber~*~