Chaste

by Tiny Reader   Sep 4, 2006


Simplicity overtakes the mind
as morning dew rolls in
across the norfolk broads.
In the arms of a man
in whom trust is prevailing,
the young maiden softly lies.

And purity here is welcomed
as love is all they see
alone in the waking morn,
a kiss upon her head
lets her know he's there.

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  • 18 years ago

    by X2892

    Very good poem u have 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Simplicity and Purity, I like how you used that words...
    Keep on writing on what you feel and like..

    God Bless!

  • 18 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    The first stanza I thought was god though starting a sentence and trailing the res ton another line kind of throws it off a bit. The second stanza felt a bit weak, though beautiful in a way.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    This reminds me of the scene in the movie "Pride and Prejudice". How wonderful! You described it perfectly, even if that's not what you were describing lol. Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Great stuff Sarah... Another piece that is written so beautifully. I very much enjoyed this poem. The title is brilliant and the use of wording is just impeccable.

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