by Simon Hayes
Great stuff Sarah... Another piece that is written so beautifully. I very much enjoyed this poem. The title is brilliant and the use of wording is just impeccable. |
by Lovely Bones
This reminds me of the scene in the movie "Pride and Prejudice". How wonderful! You described it perfectly, even if that's not what you were describing lol. Keep it up! |
The first stanza I thought was god though starting a sentence and trailing the res ton another line kind of throws it off a bit. The second stanza felt a bit weak, though beautiful in a way. |
by Misstress
Simplicity and Purity, I like how you used that words... |
by X2892
Very good poem u have 5/5 |