I love your devotion, and how you used the puddle idea, it is really cute.

Hey i like this alot and thanx 4 commentin on my poem and to answer your question Metho Drinker is about alcoholism and the relationship the alcoholic has with their addiction.

"I see my life in the
Brown of your eyes"

Replace brown with blue and it relates to me =)
This was a gorge poem and the last line set it off perfectly.
5/5
*Gem*

Thats so cute! I love this. All yours poems are great! Keep writing! 5/5! Luv, Abs!

Aww...I love this poem its so sweet! I loved how you portrayed him! Keep up the good work, and take care!
-Sweet Melody-

This poems amazing. I read youyr profile. Your strength is amazing. To stay positive after all you have been through. 5/5 keep writing. And thanx for commenting on mine :)

One word:
Stunning

This is truly a beautiful poem

Wow. i must say this is amazing. it reminded me of my feelings. i love it.

This was beautifully written. it was touching. thank u heaps for ur comment on mine - meant al0t xx

This poem reminds me of my bf and lil of my ex..how is my poem well structured?? well keep up the work!