Wow, thats morbid! I love it, it has that "thing" that makes a good poem ;)

Im so speachless.
that was so good.
i loved the story
and your rhyme's
and the flow and the words you
used it was just so perfect
everything was wonderful
i have NOTHING bad to say at all!
i loved it.
GOOD JOB.

Very creeopy. really kool : ) i love ur P{oems emma. by thew ay, i wrote 3 new poems, one mentions u. so yeha, when u get the chance : D
-Suzie
xoxo

This is the poem that put you on my faves list. Absolutely brilliant. Great poem. Can't think of one thing that I would change or find fault with. If you hadn't entered my poetry contest I would never have found you. Thank you so much for this. I love dark poetry and this has left me speechless.