Broken

by 4g0tten_f@iry   Sep 4, 2006


A million memories left to waste
Left dwelling in our eyes
AS time turns into blackened shadows
Mingled with our cries

A bond that was unbreakable
Proved to shatter with our wrongs
Breaking our once happy home
To sing our saddest song

A harp plays Heavens peaceful tune
Our remnants of long ago
Our smiles now just memories
Before our lives of broken homes

I long to take your blackened heart
And replace it with my own
For although my heartache sings aloud
At least laughter you would know

Forget me not, our bond, our life,
For without you I can't see
Our lonesome tears build my heart strong
And it's you that sets me free

Your darkness calls so true to mine
And it shall forever-more
Please promise that you'll wait at those pearly gates
And I promise you a smile just like before.

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  • 17 years ago

    by MiaFairy

    Very good!!!!!!!! i really like this one!

  • 18 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    Thank you for the comment. This is a good poem, the adjectives are okay, and the flow is good throughout the poem.
    But I was questioning the quality of the rhyme scheme.
    Is it
    A
    B
    C
    A
    ?
    I couldn't exactly tell. Anyways keep up the good work.