Good poem. I liked how it was 2 in one

Aww. I liked it loads! Lol. Well...Both of them actually. But I think you were trying to rhyme too much though in the Broken Poetry. Good job. Keep it up! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

You are the only true love I got

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I think you could have "I've" instead of "I" ...up to you though.
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Good poem, too. I was abit confused about the two poems in one? But the first part I like the most, had some good imagery in it. Great job!

Natalie``

Aww that was filled with love and emotions i loved it lots

keep it up!

Beautiful job. For some reason when I saw the title, I knew it was going to be very sweet and descriptive...lol. Keep it up

Wow, your poems are great. i really do enjoy them another ,5/5 from me.

This was really a well written piece. I love broken poetry, and you did a great job with this one. Keep it up.

Nice poem! i like da vocab n da way it flows.