Nothing

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Sep 4, 2006


I was ranting because I was hurt... I know it's not the best, but it's something.

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Lost, broken, aching hearts are scared to sing,
Everything is lost, everything is a dream.
Confused in reality, screaming aloud,
Nothing is right, no one is proud.
The hearts scream out a terrible cry,
Never wanting to believe blackened lies.
Reaching out to nothing that's there,
This is too much for one heart to bare.
Living so strong was all a dream,
Nothing is right as it all seems.

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  • 18 years ago

    by DepthofPassion

    This was an amazing poem....you should rant more often...!

  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Whoo! u won 3rd place! congrats! i posted it. i really like this one. it's a great poem! :) good luck!

  • 18 years ago

    by Landon Carter

    Another masterpiece! I think this poem of yours beautifully does the work. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    It is actaully really good! like a artist capturing a bird in flight! u capture ur mtion beaurifully!

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Wow another great poem of yours!
    i loved this first part

    "Lost, broken, aching hearts are scared to sing"

    keep it up