Wow, I really liked this one. Even though it was kinda a venting poem, I loved it. The emotions just ooze out! You had a nice flow to it aswell. Loved it very much. Keep it up & I hope you're alright. 5/5

Natalie``

Great poem. Filled with emotions. I liked the rhyming and the flow was great as well. Awsome Job. Keep it up.

It was a very good rant despite what you think. We all feel this way at times and it's always good to get it out of you. Anyways I liked the word use, the rhyming scheme was good and, it had a clear consistant and powerful message.

I really believe this poem hits its mark expressing what seems to be the pain of a rejection of sorts Iit reminded me of a pain I have felt

Once again GREAT poem!!! You are a very good writter I really enjoyed this one it was short simple and full of emotion excellent job!!

In this case, ranting is good! You expressed your feelings, and it held a lot of emotion, which is what makes poetry what it is in my mind. Keep up the great work ma dear. =) 5/5

-Te Amo.

A fantastic rant

Wow another great poem of yours!
i loved this first part

"Lost, broken, aching hearts are scared to sing"

keep it up

It is actaully really good! like a artist capturing a bird in flight! u capture ur mtion beaurifully!

Another masterpiece! I think this poem of yours beautifully does the work. 5/5.

Whoo! u won 3rd place! congrats! i posted it. i really like this one. it's a great poem! :) good luck!

This was an amazing poem....you should rant more often...!