Amamzing poem, very touching and emotional, a big well done hun. the flow was excellent, ill look forward to reading more from you

sarah

I love the flow of this poem which seems to convey very honest emotion

Very good poem, I like the rhythm and nice word choice. 5/5

Another great poem by you, very talented keep it up.

Whoa.. love the poem.. its different.. when i mean different im just talking about the spacing.. hehe.. but i really liked it.. i think i even love your poem.. as i was reading it.. it brought back some emo memories which i still carry...
Love works us in circles,

It plays with our heart.

It will fill it all up,

Just to tear it apart.

that stanza is my favorite... because its so true.. anyweiz it was really good and it not only got my attention but captured my heart as well... keep writing!

~angel~

Wow. This was different to what I had expected. It was really good. I loved the flow in this, and the rhyming was great too. You had some great vocab in there too. Awesome job! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Damn this is a beautifully sad poem...but I love it!!!! I love he imagery it paints for me, this is exactully what I was feeling a few months ago...great poem!!!

Great concept, liked the poem aswell. It was written rather well. I thought it flowed rather well. It was thrown off in some places but caught right back up after a line or two. So it didn't affect it any. I like how you ended it, it tied the entire poem together.

Wow...you are an amazing writer, especially for someone of your age. You have heaps of talent. Don't let that go. 5/5

Wonderful job. Great emotion within the words.
One thing, each stanza almost seemed like a seperate poem because each of it's rhythm was different.

Excellent... nicely written... lots of emotion 5/5

Wow this is really good. I can relate to some of this poem right now. Nicely written! 5/5

Aww it's so sad. =(

The flow was good, and I liked the imagery, and the way you 'killed your heart' lol. The rhymes were cliche again, but I still loved the poem. ^_^ 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

This poem was beautifully written and it had a lot of emotion in it i really liked it 5/5

WOW i liked this one to its really good i loved it :) ~melissaraye~