Comments : A World Of Hatred

  • 18 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    This poem is different...nut really good i lobe this part
    well then how do i know your me?
    trust.
    what do i do now?
    you wait.. it will be over soon.
    what do you meen?
    ''i took her smiles and made them mine''
    what do you meen?
    your never going back, but you may take my hand and we may walk forever and never stop into a world of hatred
    it's soooo good 5/5 keep it up
    auna

  • 18 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    It was good but me pesonally i keep the hatred poems in an old book hand written so no one has to know (but thats just me) anyways i got some new poems (more then i can count) so just read some whenever you want alright and thanks for the comment