I love it, it is very touching and don't worry God always answers prayers when the time is right. =) You are great w/words! I wish I could give you a 10 instead!

Deana dear, such an inspiration poem you'd penned here, most importantly…
God knows how you write this to express. Trust worthy, Reliable and honest. well done my friend, keep writing, and have a great day, take care....bert.

With the compassion you have for humanity, and a heart as big as the grand canyon, God should of answered your request a long time ago. But he will, dear lady, he will I have no doubt.
Excellent write 5/5

Rick

This poem is amazing, I just love it. I'll e-mail it to myself, so I can keep it and read it every now and then.

I enjoyed reading it, the theme was original and the word choice was good. However, I think there are some typos that you could correct. I always make these mistakes...wish somebody would let me know.

"Sometimes their hard to keep"

they're

"But theres so many hearts in need."

there's

Great job! 5/5

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

Cant touch this...smiling... excellent...

I'll have to just echo the last comment. Bravo, I enjoyed it very much. It's nice to see someone write so many pieces free of angst. A more bright poetry.

Dang! I am inspired, by your work. when you do a good work, I want you to lift your hand that you write with, kiss the back of your palm and tell GOD Thank you....for these gifted tools. smiling.... great !!

The first stanza of this was awesome and so was the 2nd. I liked how you started it off and the title fits the poem good. I enjoy reading your poems so I'm gonna put you on my favorites :)