by Kirsty palmer Sep 4, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
When love hurts you know its true, |
A very cute poem, but a little bit of advice try not to repeat so much into your poem it gets kinda boring((not that it was)) but it does tend to get the reader to not want to finish it because it's predictable. Overall it was a very cute and truthful poem! Well done still a 5/5! |
This one's low rated too! UGH! Lol. I thought this was cute. The flow was good, and I liked the whole 'plot' of it. But I did think that the title was a bit overused in a lot of parts. Ah well. Keep it up. You're getting there. =) 5/5 xoxo |
by Poison Ivy
Im in love!...thats for the description..very well written!:) |
by Sophie
Good work kirsty! wonderful poem. |
Wow! Another beautiful poem. Great rhyming and it flowed really well. I really loved the repetition. How you kept saying "When" and repeated the first stanza over and over. Wonderful Job. |