Together At Long Last

by Kirsty palmer   Sep 4, 2006


Its all out In the open, its much easier now,
There's no unanswered questions to what or how,
We can get on much better than we used to,
The two of us together - just me and you.
There is hope in my body that we will last,
There is no need to go back to visit the past.
We can move on forward now, just look ahead,
No more thinking and dwelling on what was said.
The feeling I have for you keeps growing stronger,
I hope that this means we will last for longer.

Never in my life did I think there would be someone like you,
As perfect as ever, and someone always there when I feel blue.
You're the last thing I think of as I sleep, and first when I awake
The sort of kind person that always gives and never has to take.

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  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Lovely pennd, so passionate yet writing with beautiful emotions....marvellous!

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I really liked this poem. It was sweet, and I could picture myself as the girl. Good job! Thanks for your comment. Jpoet*

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    OMG! How come this poem is so low rated?! I loved it! There was true emotion in it, and it kept my attention the whole way through. I liked the ending the best, even though the rest was well done as well. =) Great job. 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Sophie

    Wow! this is an absolutely beautiful poem! u can feel all the eotion as u read it and it is easy to relate to.

    sophie:)xo

    p.s i tried to vote 5/5 twice but it wouldn't let me! lol good work

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey this is really a very well written poem, words are so passionate and the way u wrote it is amazing...great write indeed

    all the best and take care

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