Awwww! This was such a beautiful poem. The words were so sweet and wonderful. I can feel all the love put into it. The rhyming was great too and the flow was flawless. [5/5] && Keep it up.

Awh, wow, that was beautiful.. The flow was good and your descripitons were lovely.. Nicely done hunny! 5/5

Hey this is really a very well written poem, words are so passionate and the way u wrote it is amazing...great write indeed

all the best and take care

Wow! this is an absolutely beautiful poem! u can feel all the eotion as u read it and it is easy to relate to.

sophie:)xo

p.s i tried to vote 5/5 twice but it wouldn't let me! lol good work

OMG! How come this poem is so low rated?! I loved it! There was true emotion in it, and it kept my attention the whole way through. I liked the ending the best, even though the rest was well done as well. =) Great job. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I really liked this poem. It was sweet, and I could picture myself as the girl. Good job! Thanks for your comment. Jpoet*

Lovely pennd, so passionate yet writing with beautiful emotions....marvellous!