You have a great talent of using imagery in your poetry and this is no exception. Another impressive poem.

Wow Simon, this is awesome! What a dark and mysterious write, wow I love it!

Simon, I have to say that I whole heartedly agree with Diana. You don't write dark poems enough in my opinion. Your love poems are sent from Heaven itself, but your dark poems give me such a chill. Creepy and intriguing...I love them.

Ooo great use of words! i love ur idea 5/5

Awesome

How deliciously dark. Very well written.
A tasty treat for the ebony heart.

It flowed quite nicely. The imagery was absolutely wonderful.

Keep it up.

This was a really good poem 5/5 well done, i think this was amazing it kept me reading, well done

"...Her victims, drowned in the poison
Absorbed by their fragile hearts.
All afraid to speak of the tale
That haunts their dreams."

-Absolutely magnificent.

I REALLY liked this poem but I'm still a little confused at who she is...if that's how it's supposed to be then that's fine...but if not could you let me know, lol...thanks. But it was DEFINATELY a great write...5/5!
~Jules

Very well written...it flowed quite nicely. The imagery was wonderful.

Keep it up.
This was a really good poem 5/5 well done,

Kool poem, i like it and the endings great!

Well, its good to see some of us are still able to write such a great poetry. A very dark one indeed Simon. I liked the style, it was well written. The scariest part, is 'men fall at her feet'

ohhh man.. I don't wanna be whipped!!! lol

Brilliant!